Writing

== **__Writing__**  In writing I think that my handwriting has improved a bit but the thing I find funny is that I write netter in a small book then in a bigger a book. Also in writing I think that my stories have improved like in my Andy Griffiths story I personally think that I did a too short a story so I’m hoping the next time we write a story that I will get a better story. __**Soldier letter term 2**__ During term 2 we started writing letters pretending that we where soldiers and nurses in the war. I was a soldier sending a letter home to my mum and dad, how we made the letters was we wrote in our work book and then typed it up. Just like in stories we did them in paragraph. In my soldier letter I included my friend. Here is my letter. **__Portal story term 2__** During term 2 we also started doing portal stories. With the portal story we had to make up a story that involved some one going from one place to another. In my story I had a girl that starts at a posh girls place and ends up going throw a crystal and ends up in some bazaar place. The main characters in mine are: Neptune and Zara. Also adding on to that in the story Zara has to free Neptune from an evil doctor named Dr Draco. Here is my Portal story. **__Andy story__** In my Andy story i don’t think that I did a good job because I think I was supposed to use Andy as the main Character and my story is too short. In my story I have a girl named Sophie as the main character. Adding on to that Sophie falls out of bed and ends up in hospital. Here is my Andy story. __**Planning**__ With my planning I think that I have improved with it for example: I have learned to put flesh on the plans, write more than just a sentence and actually make it make sense. Because I’m in Jodie’s writing group she makes sure that everyone know’s how to do plans, how she dose it is she writes down a plan for herself and then tells us to go and do a plan, then she writes her story in bit after that we go and do ours bits. Between each bit she calls us back and then she does the next paragraph.